It gets me going when reporters do the following:
"Yeah, Joe the criminal was caught. No yes?
"A water main busted, windows were busted". Criminals are busted. Water mains burst, windows break or are broken.
"He was found beat about the head and shoulders". Not beaten? And what was beaten? Head, shoulders, arms, upper body or all the above?
Some punks made the crime. How about Several criminals robbed/stole or whatever?
Though not incorrect the local rag ran this into the ground "Shortly before closing time, 2 thugs entered the establishment brandishing pistols and demanded the days receipts".
Did these people actually graduate from a journalism school? Did they pass English 101 with a "D"?
"Yeah, Joe the criminal was caught. No yes?
"A water main busted, windows were busted". Criminals are busted. Water mains burst, windows break or are broken.
"He was found beat about the head and shoulders". Not beaten? And what was beaten? Head, shoulders, arms, upper body or all the above?
Some punks made the crime. How about Several criminals robbed/stole or whatever?
Though not incorrect the local rag ran this into the ground "Shortly before closing time, 2 thugs entered the establishment brandishing pistols and demanded the days receipts".
Did these people actually graduate from a journalism school? Did they pass English 101 with a "D"?
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